LINCL10-12
keys clicking
typing out words of promise, hope, rage, boredom.
i sit here alone in a 3 walled cubicle
purpose only to stop me from seeing any life besides this flickering screen
is that what i am paying for?
typing out words of promise, hope, rage, boredom.
i sit here alone in a 3 walled cubicle
purpose only to stop me from seeing any life besides this flickering screen
is that what i am paying for?
posted by helloitsme at 5:53 PM
3 Comments:
Jen, this is really good, I definatly think you are getting better at this. The thing I try to focus on when I write really short works like this is to make each word have a definate impact. Why did you choose the number 3 for the walls of your cubicle? Why did you choose the emotions you did?
I'm very partial to themes of technological isolation and the flattening of human emotions under the lead heel of the rising technocracy, keep up the good work!
thanks tom, really all my choices were what were simply in front of me. i wrote this in a cubicle and it was jst a matter of writing exactly what i was thinking and seeing.
Yes, I'm afraid so
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