Hair like Waves
Hair like waves
Crash over me
Tangled in the night
Against my skin
between my fingers
I hold on tight
I stay awake
To watch them break
Fading in the light
Hair like waves
Crest on me
Forever in the night
Crash over me
Tangled in the night
Against my skin
between my fingers
I hold on tight
I stay awake
To watch them break
Fading in the light
Hair like waves
Crest on me
Forever in the night
posted by Ultra Toast Mosha God at 1:39 AM
5 Comments:
Dude, you are gonna have to write some crap, because I am running out of compliments!
The sorta dual imagery at work here is awesome. Intense. I think this poem is perfect. Don't change a word. Flawless.
It reminded me a wee bit of a line I really like from a Leonard Cohen song: "With your hair upon my pillow, like a sleepy golden storm"
I like that line.
I like this poem.
Like is nice!
Ha ha ha!
Honestly, I don't know what to say. This is good. I hate it that it didn't come from me. Ha! No really, I like it...a lot.
embarassment = blush x squirming
thanks!
:-)
I realize that this post is out of date - but I loved this poem. I am blessed to have this sensation every second of my life...I am elated to know that others elicit the same enjoyment from it.
Really beautiful imagery in this one.
I think I love it all the more because my boyfriend is fussy about my hair getting in his face, etc, because it makes him itch. Not very romantic, I know.
Ha Ha...
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