Tuesday, August 02, 2005

Drought

Dry Spell
Relationship hell
Burnt carcass smells

No rain
Reflects the pain
Baggage still remains

Hang on
To ticking bomb
Many years too long

Words small
I speak them all
Rain starts to fall

Sky cries
The fuse dies
End of all the lies

2 Comments:

Blogger The Duke said...

I really liked that. I read it a few times and each time is seemed to grow more complex, but yet hold onto a very appealing simplicity. It's also wonderfully descriptive and I think each of us has been there, well, at least the first 3 stanzas. The last two are the hardest.

10:27 AM  
Blogger Okami said...

I'm living this right now...

7:53 AM  

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