Tuesday, July 12, 2005

30 degrees

Hot fuzz
Warm Wind
blows through my clothes

Shadows burn
Scorched road
People wither in turn

Sweat pours
From pores
Unprepared to burn

Heat bakes
Radio Waves
Suits shed like skin

Glass domes
Spill drones
Parks full of gnomes

Sun drenched
City Stench
Never goes away

2 Comments:

Blogger The Duke said...

You sir are a poet. I hope you try and get some of your work published! I enjoy the whole mood of the poem. For me, the shorter first two lines go well with like a mood of the simplicity of summer and then words are nice and complex and contain a lot of ideas. So that is my nerd reason for liking it. My none nerd reason for liking? the last two stanza's, fuck yeah!

6:50 PM  
Blogger Ultra Toast Mosha God said...

:-)

12:55 AM  

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