Friday, August 31, 2007

Ouroborous

Circling the coils of chaos
As above, so below
Massive entropic ocean
Engender the fierce spirit

From its bloodied maw, its tail
Its graveyard of false assumptions
From a tail, to a rope, to a thread
From which we are hung

4 Comments:

Blogger eric1313 said...

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1:43 AM  
Blogger eric1313 said...

Nice work. I have definite problems being this concise in my own writings.

Hanging...
powerful imagery. Hanging from a thread of endless, almost pointless, existence.

1:46 AM  
Blogger Ultra Toast Mosha God said...

Massive entropic ocean conjures up some really strong imagery.

7:03 AM  
Blogger Ultra Toast Mosha God said...

Just read this again. The tail end of the poemrepresents the outer reaches of alientation.

How apt.

1:17 AM  

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