I am
I am a sea
Unexplored
Secrets I hide
Suffocate in the deep
I am the sky
Fragile bubble
Ready to burst
That keeps the divide
I am the space
Beyond what I know
Stars that I see
Something of me
Unexplored
Secrets I hide
Suffocate in the deep
I am the sky
Fragile bubble
Ready to burst
That keeps the divide
I am the space
Beyond what I know
Stars that I see
Something of me
posted by Ultra Toast Mosha God at 8:25 AM
4 Comments:
i know what you mean.
I really loved this!
Structurally awesome.
I like the balance of known and unknown.
I also like how it goes sea, sky, space and misses the land, to me, thats an extra level of mystery.
Excellent!
"Secrets that I hide :/: Suffocate in the deep."
I really enjoyed that phrasing as that is quite accurate of how it feels to carry burdens like that for far too long.
I guess the answer exists in whether the lies suffocate within us, or if we are the ones who suffocate as a result of them.
Truly enjoyed this Ultra.
this is great. protrays so much in a very concise form.perfectlly sturctured.
Post a Comment
<< Home